Post by Michelle on Feb 18, 2009 15:59:35 GMT -6
Okay so i'm writing a story... never know possibly a book and I'm going to let you read the first ROUGH draft chapter. This is Chapter one.
Description:
The Black Hearts Society is a group of Vampires that only brings someone into the group when one of their own has died or disappeared.
Zabrina is just a average girl with no family and has no connect to the world around her. She has become a prime target for the Black Hearts.
Lance who is part of the Black Hearts Society has shown some interest in Zabrina but she can’t see why.
Victoria the leader of the Black Hearts Society has befriended her and started to bring her into the fold.
But Derek doesn’t like her new friends
Will Zabrina choose Derek who has been after her since middle school or will she stray over to a group that’s scary and mysterious? She likes her new friends and is attracted to Lance. But will she be able to give up her isolated life to join a group of vampires and be connected to them for life?
Will Lance be able to keeps his emotions in check and not get to attached to her? Or will his emotions take over causing problems with his girlfriend?
Will Derek let this happen to Zabrina?
Will Zabrina even be given a choice if she wants to join?
This story as been moved to a location where access is required so the story can not be stolen or reposted somewhere else without permission. You can find the story now at www.myspace.com/blackheartsseries permission will have to be granted and you'll have to let me know who you are as well. I won't be adding anyone I di not know. Sorry and thank you.
Description:
The Black Hearts Society is a group of Vampires that only brings someone into the group when one of their own has died or disappeared.
Zabrina is just a average girl with no family and has no connect to the world around her. She has become a prime target for the Black Hearts.
Lance who is part of the Black Hearts Society has shown some interest in Zabrina but she can’t see why.
Victoria the leader of the Black Hearts Society has befriended her and started to bring her into the fold.
But Derek doesn’t like her new friends
Will Zabrina choose Derek who has been after her since middle school or will she stray over to a group that’s scary and mysterious? She likes her new friends and is attracted to Lance. But will she be able to give up her isolated life to join a group of vampires and be connected to them for life?
Will Lance be able to keeps his emotions in check and not get to attached to her? Or will his emotions take over causing problems with his girlfriend?
Will Derek let this happen to Zabrina?
Will Zabrina even be given a choice if she wants to join?
This story as been moved to a location where access is required so the story can not be stolen or reposted somewhere else without permission. You can find the story now at www.myspace.com/blackheartsseries permission will have to be granted and you'll have to let me know who you are as well. I won't be adding anyone I di not know. Sorry and thank you.
